@sinorcanut
SinorcanutAlthough more abstract than Siken’s Crush, he has the same type of mythical stream-of-consciousness prose. I think that sometimes, the lack of solidity in his writing ends up hurting the storyline that he creates in his poems. Nevertheless, very poetic read
SinorcanutSome things just couldn’t sit right with me: Olivia is kinda incompetent and bratty, Colin’s personality falls sorta flat, and the writing seems simplistic. Saying “he’s so sexy” isn’t good enough. I also don’t think **** is Painter’s strong suit, I think her wholesome novels work better.<br/><br/>Idk I just couldn’t feel super invested into the story. They go through this whole push-and-pull and “I’m sorry” spiel that seemed counterintuitive and dumb for the characters.