Black Heart

"Constantly kept me hooked wondering what was going to happen next, and a few parts even had me on the verge of tears! -Spoilers ahead!- Although I really enjoyed reading this, I didn't much care for the whole thing where Grace wondered if Lorcan might be her father, and didn't seem as bothered by the idea as she should have given her longstanding crush on him, and it felt very gross. Then there was the whole thing where Jacoby kept getting flustered by Sugar Pie after going after Jasmine Peacock for so long and finally being together and seeming blissfully happy, it felt very off and uncomfortable. And THEN the bit where after traveling with Jasmine, her and Connor getting together and Jasmine cheating on Jacoby...again, it felt very uncomfortable and unnecessary, and further perpetuates the notion that a woman can't be alone with another guy while in a relationship without cheating. And it felt pretty out of the blue anyway."